Education & Success – Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2 ngày 27/06/2020

Success

Some people think the qualities a person needs to become successful in today’s world cannot be learned at a university or similar academic institution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Topic : Education

Keywords: qualities, successful, cannot be learned, university.

Dạng bài : Agree or disagree – đồng tình hoặc không đồng tình với ý kiến được đưa ra

Education & Success

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Education & Success - Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2 ngày 27/06/2020 1

In today’s highly complicated world, it is believed that universities and other academic institutions cannot provide students with essential attributes for them to succeed in life. I think that although people can gain vital qualities at tertiary education, they should keep practicing and working hard to become successful

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On the one hand, the importance of educational settings cannot be ignored. First, students can acquire qualities which are of paramount importance for their life success. For example, by completing assignments and projects within a time budget, students can learn to plan and prioritize, which sharpens their time-management skills. Second, achievements in certain areas only go for qualified professionals. In other words, in some highly skilled professions, knowledge at academic institutions is a prerequisite. Take the case of doctors, for instance, the continuous diagnosis and practice cannot compensate for years of rigorous training at a medical school.

On the other hand, individuals cannot succeed with academic qualifications alone. First, people need to sharpen their skill sets in the real working environment. As theories from textbooks are generally outdated, one needs to expose themselves to various real-life situations at the workplace; otherwise, they will fail to meet their job requirements. Besides, some talented individuals still manage to achieve success without any degrees. In the case of Bill Gates, a successful billionaire who quitted his program at Harvard, a prestigious university, it is his passion and diligence which drove him to the fame and fortune he deserves.

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In conclusion, I think qualities to success can be learned at school as long as students are aware of self-improvement. 

Bài mẫu hoàn chỉnh

In today’s highly complicated world, it is believed that universities and other academic institutions cannot provide students with essential qualities for them to succeed in life. I think that although people can gain vital qualities at tertiary education, they should keep practicing and working hard to become successful

On the one hand, the importance of educational settings cannot be ignored. First, students can acquire qualities which are of paramount importance for their life success. For example, by completing assignments and projects within a time budget, students can learn to plan and prioritize, which sharpens their time-management skills. Second, achievements in certain areas only go for qualified professionals. In other words, in some highly skilled professions, knowledge at academic institutions is a prerequisite. Take the case of doctors, for instance, the continuous diagnosis and practice cannot compensate for years of rigorous training at a medical school. 

On the other hand, individuals cannot succeed with academic qualifications alone. First, people need to sharpen their skill sets in the real working environment. As theories from textbooks are generally outdated, one needs to expose themselves to various real-life situations at the workplace; otherwise, they will fail to meet their job requirements. Besides, some talented individuals still manage to achieve success without any degrees. In the case of Bill Gates, a successful billionaire who quitted his program at Harvard, a prestigious university, it is his passion and diligence which drove him to the fame and fortune he deserves.

In conclusion, I think qualities to success can be learned at school as long as students are aware of self-improvement.

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(Written by Ms Nguyen Thi Thu Huong, IELTS 8.0)

Paraphrase các keywords:

  • be successful (a) – success (n) – succeed (v): thành công

Các từ vựng hay trong bài :

  • be essential = be of paramount importance: quan trọng
  • university degrees = academic qualifications – university education: bằng cấp đại học, giáo dục đại học
  • to acquire (knowledge/ skills): tiếp thu (kiến thức/ kỹ năng)
  • to complete st within a time budget: hoàn thành cái gì trong quỹ thời gian cho phép
  • highly-skilled professions: những nghề nghiệp có chuyên môn kỹ thuật cao
  • a prerequisite: yêu cầu tiên quyết
  • diagnosis: chẩn đoán
  • to compensate for: bù đắp cho
  • rigorous training: đào tạo nghiêm ngặt
  • to sharpen their skill sets: rèn luyện kỹ năng
  • be outdated: lỗi thời
  • to manage to: thành công trong việc làm cái gì
  • diligence: sự chăm chỉ
  • fame and fortune: danh vọng và tiền tài
  • be given credit: được tán dương, trân trọng

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