Bài mẫu đề thi IELTS Writing 29/08/2020 – Job Satisfaction.

job satisfaction

The most essential component of a person’s life is his or her time at the workplace, and life turns meaningless once no job satisfaction is obtained. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

( Yếu tố quan trọng nhất của cuộc đời con người là khi họ ở nơi làm việc, và họ sẽ cảm thấy cuộc đời vô nghĩa nếu không đạt được sự hài lòng trong công việc. Bạn đồng ý hay không đồng ý?)

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Topic: Job satisfaction

Keywords: most essential, workplace, meaningless 

Dạng bài: Agree or Disagree – Đồng tình hay không đồng tình với ý kiến của đề bài

Cách viết mở bài

Bài mẫu đề thi IELTS Writing 29/08/2020 - Job Satisfaction

It is argued that the lack of job satisfaction will lead to a meaningless life because people spend a large amount of their lifetime working. I completely disagree with this viewpoint because a meaningful life does not stem from job fulfilment alone.

Cách viết thân bài

Bài mẫu đề thi IELTS Writing 29/08/2020 - Job Satisfaction

Admittedly, there are compelling reasons why being satisfied with jobs is of paramount importance. First, as most people spend a significant amount of time, approximately 40 hours a week, at the workplace, achievements at work can give people a sense of purpose and achievement, which are two of the key elements of true meaning in life. In fact, those who find themselves stuck in a dead-end job will doubt themselves, have a low sense of self-worth, and even suffer from some psychological disorders such as depression or anxiety. Besides, jobs can have profound effects on other aspects, such as health or romantic relationships. As a result, the fulfillment at work can be transferred to the overall contentment of other facets of our lives.

However, that is not to say that one cannot achieve a meaningful life without career satisfaction. First, it is perhaps because a meaningful life is attributable to various factors, ranging from leisure pursuits to social status. For instance, some stay-at-home mothers can totally feel satisfied provided that their children are well-behaved and achieve good grades at school. Besides, what makes a person feel fulfilled is practically personal preferences. Therefore, to assess whether a person finds his or her life meaningful actually depends on their core values, which varies from one individual to another.

Cách viết kết bài

Bài mẫu đề thi IELTS Writing 29/08/2020 - Job Satisfaction

In conclusion, I believe that job satisfaction is not the sole determinant of meaning in life. Other factors are just as crucial and differ greatly among individuals.

Bài mẫu hoàn chỉnh

It is argued that the lack of job satisfaction will lead to a meaningless life because people spend a large amount of their lifetime working. I completely disagree with this viewpoint because a meaningful life does not stem from job fulfillment alone.

Admittedly, there are compelling reasons why being satisfied with jobs is of paramount importance. First, as most people spend a significant amount of time, approximately 40 hours a week, at the workplace, achievements at work can give people a sense of purpose and achievement, which are two of the key elements of true meaning in life. In fact, those who find themselves stuck in a dead-end job will doubt themselves, have a low sense of self-worth, and even suffer from some psychological disorders such as depression or anxiety. Besides, jobs can have profound effects on other aspects, such as health or romantic relationships. As a result, the fulfillment at work can be transferred to the overall contentment of other facets of our lives.

However, that is not to say that one cannot achieve a meaningful life without career satisfaction. First, it is perhaps because a meaningful life is attributable to various factors, ranging from leisure pursuits to social status. For instance, some stay-at-home mothers can totally feel satisfied provided that their children are well-behaved and achieve good grades at school. Besides, what makes a person feel fulfilled is practically personal preferences. Therefore, to assess whether a person finds his or her life meaningful actually depends on their core values, which varies from one individual to another.

In conclusion, I believe that job satisfaction is not the sole determinant of meaning in life. Other factors are just as crucial and differ greatly among individuals.

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(Written by Ms. Nguyen Thi Thu Huong, IELTS 8.0)

Paraphrase keywords

  • Be essential = is of paramount importance
  • component = elements = factor = aspect = facet = determinant
  • at the workplace = at work
  • be meaningless (adj) >< be meaningful (adj) – meaning (n)
  • satisfaction (n) – be satisfied (adj) – fulfillment (n) – be fulfilled (adj)

Các từ vựng hay trong bài

  • to stem from: bắt nguồn từ
  • compelling: có tính thuyết phục
  • a sense of purpose and achievement: cảm giác có mục tiêu và thành tựu
  • be/ get stuck in a dead-end job: bị trì trệ trong một công việc không có tương lai
  • to have a sense of self-worth: có cảm giác bản thân có giá trị
  • to suffer from sth: chịu đựng
  • psychological disorders such as depression or anxiety: những căn bệnh tâm lý như trầm cảm và lo lắng
  • be attributable to: là do nguyên nhân
  • leisure pursuits: thú vui rảnh rỗi
  • be well-behaved: cư xử đúng mực
  • core values: giá trị cốt lõi

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