Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2 ngày 30/05/2020 – Education System

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Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?

(Một số hệ thống giáo dục bắt học sinh tập trung vào một số môn học nhất định ở độ tuổi 15, trong khi những hệ thống khác yêu cầu học sinh học một lượng lớn môn học cho đến khi tốt nghiệp. Lợi ích của mỗi hệ thống là gì ? Cái nào tốt hơn?)

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Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2 ngày 10/10/2020 – Experience and Education

Phân tích đề

Topic: Education systems

Keywords: certain subjects, 15, a wide range of subjects, leave, benefits, better

Dạng bài: Bài thuộc dạng 2-part question, tức có hai yêu cầu trong đề bài (What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?)

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Cách viết mở bài

Education System
       Education System

In many parts of the world, students are made to attend classes of various academic subjects, while in some other regions, school curricula only comprise a limited number of subjects. Either educational paradigm offers its own merits, yet I believe a narrower teaching scope is much more beneficial for students’ sake.

Cách viết thân bài

Education System
   Education System

On the one hand, advocates of teaching children a wide spectrum of subjects may claim that students will be provided with concrete foundations of different natural and societal concepts. For example, as 8th graders in Vietnam are required to attend 12 subjects which cover a wide spectrum of theory and application, they are capable of justifying physical phenomena, carrying out scientific experiments, and performing art. In this sense, a school system with a wide array of academic disciplines provides young learners with a broader understanding and perspective, preparing those versatile individuals well for their future life.

On the other hand, students who learn only a few specific subjects can save more time for other pursuits.  Having fewer subjects to study, students are granted the opportunities to either participate in stress-relieving activities, such as swimming or skating or specialize in their subjects of interest. The former can allow young learners to recharge their energy, while the latter can be of great help for those who want to work in academia in their later life. In fact, such activities have been proven to boost their academic performance, making this education system better than making students learn a variety of subjects.

Cách viết kết bài

Education System
        Education System

In conclusion, although broad and holistic curricula can equip students with a greater understanding of their surroundings, I strongly believe that students can reap greater benefits from school systems with an emphasis on certain subjects.

Bài mẫu hoàn chỉnh

In many parts of the world, students are made to attend classes of various academic subjects, while in some other regions, school curricula only comprise a limited number of subjects. Either educational paradigm offers its own merits, yet I believe a narrower teaching scope is much more beneficial for students’ sake.

On the one hand, advocates of teaching children a wide spectrum of subjects may claim that students will be provided with concrete foundations of different natural and societal concepts. For example, as 8th graders in Vietnam are required to attend 12 subjects which cover a wide spectrum of theory and application, they are capable of justifying physical phenomena, carrying out scientific experiments, and performing art. In this sense, a school system with a wide array of academic disciplines provides young learners with a broader understanding and perspective, preparing those versatile individuals well for their future life.

On the other hand, students who learn only a few specific subjects can save more time for other pursuits.  Having fewer subjects to study, students are granted the opportunities to either participate in stress-relieving activities, such as swimming or skating, or specialize in their subjects of interest. The former can allow young learners to recharge their energy, while the latter can be of great help for those who want to work in academia in their later life. In fact, such activities have been proven to boost their academic performance, making this education system better than making students learn a variety of subjects.

In conclusion, although broad and holistic curricula can equip students with a greater understanding of their surroundings, I strongly believe that students can reap greater benefits from school systems with an emphasis on certain subjects.

284 words

(Written by Ms. Nguyen Thi Thu Huong, IELTS 8.0)

Paraphrase keywords

  • Education System = School systems = educational paradigms: mô hình giáo dục
  • Attend classes = learn = study: học
  • Academic subjects = academic disciplines: các môn học
  • Various subjects= a variety of subjects = a wide spectrum of subjects = a wide array of subjects 
  • Certain subjects = a limited number of subjects = a narrower teaching scope = a few specific subjects
  • Focus on = specialize in – an emphasis on: tập trung vào, chú trọng vào

Các từ vựng hay trong bài

  • school curriculum (prular: curricula): chương trình học
  • School systems = educational paradigms: mô hình giáo dục
  • For sb’s sake: vì lợi ích của ai
  • Be provided with st = be equipped with st = provide sb with st = equip sb with st: được cung cấp cái gì/ cung cấp cái gì cho ai
  • Understanding and perspective: sự hiểu biết và nhìn nhận
  • versatile individuals: những người giỏi giang, hiểu biết
  • Pursuits: đam mê
  • to boost their academic performance: tăng kết quả học tập
  • to boost and holistic curricula: chương trình học rộng và toàn diện
  • to reap benefits from: thu được lợi ích từ
  • Education System : Hệ thống giáo dục

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Ms. Nguyen Thi Thu Huong, IELTS 8.0.

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