Bài mẫu Speaking band 8 – Describe a natural beauty

natural beauty

Describe a natural beauty.

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Trong chủ đề phụ đầu tiên về Natural Beauty, nếu chúng ta nắm được ‘xương sống’ triển khai (Ví dụ, chúng mình chọn ‘Describe a beach’và chuẩn bị thật kĩ cho nó), thì khi đi thi, đề bài hỏi ‘Describe a river/ lake/ mountain/ forest, etc’ thì chúng ta hoàn toàn giải quyết được, bởi vì:

Cho dù hỏi về ‘A beach’ hay ‘A river/ lake/ mountain/ river’ thì chúng ta cũng sẽ phải đề cập tới:

  • Specific information about this place
  • Location
  • Who you went with/ Where you stayed
  • Activities you engaged in while you were there

Nếu những nội dung trên chúng ta chuẩn bị kĩ cho ‘A beach’ rồi, thì cứ thế khéo léo áp dụng cho ‘A river/ lake/ mountain/ river’ thôi.

Hãy cùng cô Trương Thu Hương – Academic Manager của Anh ngữ SYM giải quyết chủ đề Natural Beauty này với địa danh nổi tiếng của nước ta – Vịnh Hạ Long nha.

Describe a natural beauty

You should say:

  • What is it
  • Who you went with
  • When you visited it

And explain why it is a place worth visiting.

Phân tích cách triển khai bài mẫu Hạ Long Bay nhé

Bước 1: Giới thiệu

 

Today I’d like to tell you about a natural beauty in Vietnam that has become one of the most popular destinations in the world.
Bước 2: Triển khai các ý

▶ Ý 1: What it is

ü  Lưu ý: Đừng dừng lại ở việc chỉ nói tên địa danh. Chúng mình triển khai thêm:

·         Một là: vị trí của địa danh đó ‘in Southern Vietnam …’

·         Hai là: Nó nổi tiếng thế nào ‘it attracts milions of tourists …’

 

 

▶ Ý 2: Who you went with and where you stayed

 

▶ Ý 3: What you did there

(Chuyển thành ý này nha)

It’s Halong bay- a complex of beach and bay in Southern Vietnam that has been recognized as the world heritage by UNESCO. Every year, it attracts millions of tourists from all over the world and generates income for local people through several tourism services such as accommodation and luxury cruise.

 

 

 

I went there with my family last summer vacation. We chose this place after a lot of thorough research. We stayed at a self-catering hotel that overlooked the sea. It was such a stunning view.

Well, we had a blast at Halong bay. We took part in many activities such as swimming, volleyball and sailing. We got up at breaking dawn to watch the sunrise, stroll along the beach, and make sandcastles and swim at sunset. We went there out of season, so there were no flocks of tourists as in peak season.

Bước 3: Explain why it is a place worth visiting

 

Going sightseeing at this place was a once-in-a-lifetime opportunity as it’s endowed with a breathtaking landscape that took my breath away: crystal clear seawater, smooth sand and mountain range spreading to the infinity. I particularly liked the overnight cruise in which I could observe the sky full of sparkling stars and indulge in the still of the night.

▶ I also really like the local residents who gave us very warming welcome. They were incredibly friendly and accommodating. There was one time I got lost, and some locals were willing to get me to my hotel although it was a pretty long distance. I could learn from their diligence, optimism and hospitability.

Bước 4: Đừng quên kết thức bài nói That’s all I want to say.

SAMPLE ANSWER (band 8.0)

Today I’d like to tell you about a natural beauty in Vietnam that has become one of the most popular destinations in the world

It’s Halong bay- a complex of beach and bay in Southern Vietnam that has been recognized as the world heritage by UNESCO. Every year, it attracts millions of tourists from all over the world and generates income for local people through several tourism services such as accommodation and luxury cruise.

I went there with my family last summer vacation. We chose this place after a lot of thorough research. We stayed at a self-catering hotel that overlooked the sea. It was such a stunning view.

Well, we had a blast at Halong bay. We took part in many activities such as swimming, volleyball and sailing. We got up at breaking dawn to watch the sunrise, stroll along the beach, and make sand castles and swim at sunset. We went there out of season, so there were no flocks of tourists as in peak season.

Going sightseeing at this place was a once-in-a-lifetime opportunity as it’s endowed with breathtaking landscape that took my breath away: crystal clear sea water, smooth sand and mountain ranges spreading to the infinity. I particularly liked the overnight cruise in which I could observe the sky full of sparkling stars and indulge in the still of the night.

▶ I also really like the local residents who gave us very warming welcome. They were incredibly friendly and accommodating. There was one time I got lost, and some locals were willing to get me to my hotel although it was a pretty long distance. I could learn from their diligence, optimism and hospitability.

That’s all I want to say.

Từ vựng hay trong bài

  • Be thorough: cẩn thận, kĩ lưỡng
  • Self-catering: tự cung tự cấp
  • To overlook st: ở vị trí đối diện cái gì
  • Be stunning: rất đẹp, choáng ngợp
  • To have a blast: rất vui
  • Breaking dawn: sáng tinh mơ
  • Be out of season: không phải mùa cao điểm
  • Flock: đám đông người
  • Peak season: Mùa cao điểm
  • To go sightseeing: đi ngắm cảnh
  • Once-in-a-lifetime: cơ hội có một không hai
  • Be endowed with st: được trời phú cho cái gì
  • To take sb’s breath away: khiến ai đó choáng ngợp
  • Sparkling stars: những ngôi sao lấp lánh
  • Still: Sự tĩnh lặng
  • Be ccommodating: hay giúp đỡ người khác, tốt bụng
  • Hospitality: sự hiếu khách

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Ms. Trương Thu Hương – Academic Manager

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