Describe a situation when you celebrated your achievement – Bài mẫu Speaking band 8.0

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A situation when you celebrate your achievement là một chủ đề lạ trong IELTS Speaking.

Topic này thuộc chủ đề EXPERIENCES & EVENTS, một Topic khá là rộng. Trải nghiệm và sự kiện trong cuộc đời thì chúng mình có vô số: đỗ đại học, học lại, thất tình, trúng xổ số, … nói chung không thể đếm xuể. Theo cô Trương Thu Hương – Academic Manager của Anh ngữ SYM, chúng mình có thể chia những sự kiện và trải nghiệm trong cuộc đời thành 2 nhóm: Happy experiences & Sad experiences.

Trong chủ đề phụ HAPPY EXPERIENCES, hãy cùng nghiên cứu topic Describe a situation when you celebrated your achievement nhé

Tham khảo:

Describe a child you know

Describe a person who is good at his/ her job

Describe a person who often travels by plane

Describe a person who tries to protect the environment

Describe an old person you admire.

Describe someone who has had an important influence on your life

Describe someone you are close to or know a lot about

Describe an old person who has influenced you

Describe a situation when you celebrated your achievement

You should say:

  • When it was
  • Whom you told about your achievement
  • What you did to celebrate

How you felt after you celebrated your achievement

Phân tích cách triển khai bài mẫu

Step 1 Today I’d like to tell you about a time I celebrated my achievement.
Step 2

When it was

It was over ten years ago when I got the announcement that I passed the university entrance exam. I was so over the moon and screamed as loudly as possible. I had been studying very hard, burning the candle at both ends and eventually, the result I got was worth my enormous efforts.
 

Whom you told about your achievement

Then, I told my parents about the great news, and they got so excited. They said that they took great pride in me, and they decided to give me some money to throw a party to celebrate my success with my friends.
 

What you did to celebrate

After that, I called my best friends. They were so happy for me. I invited them to have some street food and drinks which would be my treat. They loved to join, and we gathered at about 5 pm. Then we ate a lot of good food, chattered non-stop until 8 pm. Next, we decided to go to a small pub where we could enjoy the vibrant music and danced joyfully.
Step 3

How you felt after you celebrated your achievement

I got so high after I went out with my friends. We did have a blast. We didn’t get home until 1 AM. My parents were still up when I got home. They were just a bit unhappy about me getting home so late, but they just let it go later.

Well, after having so much fun that day, I got excited yet a bit worried about my college life. I was going to get to know a lot of new friends from many parts of the country and learn new things, but I would have to learn to take care of myself and become partially independent, I mean financially independent. I would have to get a part-time and learn to manage time for study, work, and social life.

 

Step 4

That’s all I want to say.

SAMPLE ANSWER (band 8.0)

Today I’d like to tell you about a time I celebrated my achievement.

It was over ten years ago when I got the announcement that I passed the university entrance exam. I was so over the moon and screamed as loudly as possible. I had been studying very hard, burning the candle at both ends and eventually, the result I got was worth my enormous efforts.

Then, I told my parents about the great news, and they got so excited. They said that they took great pride in me, and they decided to give me some money to throw a party to celebrate my success with my friends.

After that, I called my best friends. They were so happy for me. I invited them to have some street food and drinks which would be my treat. They loved to join, and we gathered at about 5 pm. Then we ate a lot of good food, chattered non-stop until 8 pm. Next, we decided to go to a small pub where we could enjoy the vibrant music and danced joyfully.

I got so high after I went out with my friends. We did have a blast. We didn’t get home until 1 AM. My parents were still up when I got home. They were just a bit unhappy about me getting home so late, but they just let it go later.

Well, after having so much fun that day, I got excited yet a bit worried about my college life. I was going to get to know a lot of new friends from many parts of the country and learn new things, but I would have to learn to take care of myself and become partially independent, I mean financially independent. I would have to get a part-time and learn to manage time for study, work, and social life.

That’s all I want to say.

Từ vựng hay trong bài

  • Be over the moon: rất vui, hạnh phúc
  • To burn the candle at both ends: học hành/ làm việc rất chăm chỉ
  • took great pride in smb/ sth: tự hào về ai/ cái gì
  • throw a party: tổ chức một bữa tiệc
  • one’s treat: ai đãi
  • to chatter: nó chuyện phiếm
  • be vibrant: sôi động
  • be high: phấn khích
  • a blast: cuộc vui, thác loạn
  • be up: còn thức (chưa ngủ)
  • to let sth go: bỏ qua chuyện gì
  • achievement: thành tựu

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