Bài mẫu Speaking band 8.0 – Describe someone who has had an important influence on your life

Describe someone

Describe someone who has had an important influence on your life

Mô tả một người có ảnh hưởng quan trọng (an important influence) là một đề thuộc chủ đề cốt lõi DESCRIBE A PERSON. Hãy cùng nghiên cứu cấu trúc triển khai mô tả một người trong bài post này nhé.

Dưới đây là bài mẫu Speaking Part 2 do cô Trương Thu Hương – Academic Manager của Anh ngữ SYM làm. Từ vựng mang tính thực hành cao, chú trọng vào cấu trúc bài nói để ăn điểm rõ ràng, và quan trọng nhất là phát âm chuẩn. Hãy cùng xem bài các em nhé

Tham khảo:

Describe a child you know

Describe a person who is good at his/ her job

Describe a person who often travels by plane

Describe a person who tries to protect the environment

Describe an old person you admire.

Describe someone who has had an important influence on your life

You should say:

  • Who that person is
  • How you knew him/ her/ What she looks like
  • How she is like

And explain how that person has had an important impact on your life.

Phân tích cách triển khai bài mẫu

Step 1 Today I want to share with you about a person who has influenced me a lot.
Step 2

Who she is

What she looks like

 

It’s my mother. She’s now in middle sixties, but she looks quite young for her age. Everyone says that she’s a petite woman with sun-tanned skin and a shiny smile.

What she is like She’s very hard-working. Just a few years ago, she got up at breaking dawn and worked until dusk to get enough money for my education. However hard she worked, we were always a hard-up family, our income was always at subsistence level. It meant that when a member got sick and was hospitalized, we had to borrow money from others and paid off later.
Step 3

Explain how that person has had an important impact on your life.

 

My mother has set several good examples of behaviors so that l can learn and become mature.

The first thing she’s ingrained in me is kindness. Since I was a child, I have seen her doing small but warm-hearted things for people around her. For example, she made some dishes for both my families and some neighbors, and she waited until they got home and gave them the dishes. Needless to say, the neighbors were so touched, and they always complimented on my mother’s great cooking.

Another negative of her that I can imitate is her attention to details. This ranges from the way she chooses the right words to say so that people always feel respected to the way she puts her heart and soul in the dishes and some handmade items she makes. For example, she always selects the best ingredients to make sure the dish is perfect. She can get up very early to go the market to get fresh vegetables and meat and spend hours on elaborate preparations later.

Step 4 That’s all I want to say.

SAMPLE ANSWER (band 8.0)

Today I want to share with you about a person who has influenced me a lot.

It’s my mother. She’s now in middle sixties, but she looks quite young for her age. Everyone says that she’s a petite woman with sun-tanned skin and a shiny smile.

She’s very hard-working. Just a few years ago, she got up at breaking dawn and worked until dusk to get enough money for my education. However hard she worked, we were always a hard-up family, our income was always at subsistence level. It meant that when a member got sick and was hospitalized, we had to borrow money from others and paid off later.

My mother has set several good examples of behaviors so that l can learn and become mature.

The first thing she’s ingrained in me is kindness. Since I was a child, I have seen her doing small but warm-hearted things for people around her. For example, she made some dishes for both my families and some neighbors, and she waited until they got home and gave them the dishes. Needless to say, the neighbors were so touched, and they always complimented on my mother’s great cooking.

Another negative of her that I can imitate is her attention to details. This ranges from the way she chooses the right words to say so that people always feel respected to the way she puts her heart and soul in the dishes and some handmade items she makes. For example, she always selects the best ingredients to make sure the dish is perfect. She can get up very early to go the market to get fresh vegetables and meat and spend hours on elaborate preparations later.

That’s all I want to say.

Từ vựng hay trong bài

  • Be petite: nhỏ nhắn (vóc dáng)
  • Be sun-tanned: rám nắng
  • Breaking dawn: sáng sớm tinh mơ
  • Be hard-up: khó khăn, thiếu thốn
  • Subsistence: vừa đủ (cho nhu cầu tồn tại)
  • Be hopsitalized: nhập viện
  • To ingrain sth in smb: tạo một niềm tin/ suy nghĩ trong ai
  • Be touched: cảm động
  • To compliment on sth: khen cái gì
  • To put one’s heart and soul in sth: đặt tâm huyết vào việc gì
  • Be elaborate: kĩ càng, tỉ mẩn

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Ms. Trương Thu Hương – Academic Manager

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