Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2 ngày 4/1/2020 – Men’s sport vs women’s sport

men's sport

Đề thi IELTS Writing ngày 4/12020

Today, TV channels provide men’s sport show more than women’s sport show. Why? Should TV channel give equal time for women’s sport and men’s sport?

(Ngày nay, các kênh trên TV cung cấp nhiều chương trình thể thao nam nhiều hơn chương trình thể thao nữ. Tại sao? Kênh TV có nên dành thời gian bằng nhau cho chương trình thể thao nam và chương trình thể thao nữ không?)

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Mở bài:

Để viết được một mở bài hiệu quả, chúng ta cần paraphrase đề bài và đưa ra câu trả lời trực tiếp cho câu hỏi của bài. Lưu ý mở bài thường gồm 2 câu hỏi tương ứng với 2 chức năng này, độ dài khoảng 35-45 chữ

Cách paraphrase - men's sport

Do đó, ta viết được mở bài như sau:

These days, TV programs featuring men’s sport seem to eclipse female sports. The reason for this stems from a wider audience watching men’s sports, and I believe that TV producers should pay equal attention to games played by both genders.

Thân bài

Đề bài gồm 2 câu hỏi, và chúng ta sẽ có 2 thân bài tương ứng để lần lượt trả lời hai câu hỏi này.

Men's sport

Do đó, ta viết được thân bài như sau:

The major factor leading to the preference for men’s sport is a wider audience of sports played by men. In fact, the audience of sports featuring male athletes considerably outnumbers those played by women. For example, in 2018, men’s football, which is regarded as the King of sports, attracts ten times more spectators than women’s football in Vietnam alone. Therefore, games played by males generate more investments from advertising contracts and sponsorship, contributing more profits to TV programmers.

However, I would argue that sports performed by both sexes should be given even TV coverage. First, such equality provides female athletes an incentive to cultivate their talents, therefore devote outstanding performances. This will also promote sportsmanship where players of both genders are given equal opportunities to develop their talents. Another reason is the growing interest in women’s sports in recent years. In other words, sports largely dominated by females’ presence, such as volleyball, have gained in popularity; as a result, there should be more show time for such female programs.

Kết luận:

Kết luận lại nguyên nhân chính và nên có thời gian bằng nhau cho hai loại chương trình

Lưu ý: kết bài khép lại vấn đề, không thêm ý mới

Men's sport

In conclusion, the universal interest in men’s sport show is the primary reason why such programs prevail among sports channels on television, and it seems to me that TV coverage should not be biased and instead give equal attention to women’s sport.

SAMPLE ANSWER:

These days, TV programs featuring men’s sport seem to eclipse female sports. The reason for this stems from a wider audience watching men’s sports, and I believe that TV producers should pay equal attention to games played by both genders.

The major factor leading to the preference for men’s sport is a wider audience of sports played by men. In fact, the audience of sports featuring male athletes considerably outnumbers those played by women. For example, in 2018, men’s football, which is regarded as the King of sports, attracts ten times more spectators than women’s football in Vietnam alone. Therefore, games played by males generate more investments from advertising contracts and sponsorship, contributing more profits to TV programmers.

However, I would argue that sports performed by both sexes should be given even TV coverage. First, such equality provides female athletes an incentive to cultivate their talents, therefore devote outstanding performances. This will also promote sportsmanship where players of both genders are given equal opportunities to develop their talents. Another reason is the growing interest in women’s sports in recent years. In other words, sports largely dominated by females’ presence, such as volleyball, have gained in popularity; as a result, there should be more show time for such female programs.

In conclusion, the universal interest in men’s sport show is the primary reason why such programs prevail among sports channels on television, and it seems to me that TV coverage should not be biased and instead give equal attention to women’s sport.

Written by Ms Thu Huong Nguyen, SYM English

 (251 words, band 7.0+)

Những từ vựng hay được sử dụng trong bài

  • eclipse: che khuất, chiếm ưu thế
  • the preference for: sự ưa thích
  • outnumber: đông hơn, nhiều hơn
  • be regarded as: được coi như
  • generate (money): tạo ra tiền
  • incentive: sự khích lệ, sự khuyến khích
  • cultivate/develop talents: nuôi dưỡng, phát triển tài năng
  • devote outstanding performance: cống hiến màn trình diễn đỉnh cao
  • promote sportsmanship: thúc đẩy tinh thần thể thao
  • the growing interest in: mối quan tâm ngày càng lớn dành cho
  • dominate: chiếm ưu thế, áp đảo

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