Bài mẫu đề thi IELTS Writing 19/10/2019 – Travelling

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Many people are now spending more and more time travelling to work or school, some people believe that this is a negative development, while others think there are some benefits. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

( Ngày nay, nhiều người dành nhiều thời gian hơn để di chuyển tới nơi làm việc hoặc trường học. Một số người tin rằng điều này sẽ có ảnh hưởng tiêu cực, trong khi những người khác nghĩ nó mang lại một số lợi ích. Thảo luận cả 2 ý kiến và đưa ra ý kiến của bạn ) 

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Topic: Travelling

Keywords: more time, travelling to work or school, negative, benefits

Dạng bài: Discuss both view and give your opinion --> đưa ra lý lẽ cho cả hai ý kiến, và đưa ra ý kiến cá nhân về việc ủng hộ ý kiến nào. Để đạt được điểm cao, thí sinh cần đưa ra ý kiến cá nhân của mình bằng cách cụm từ (In my opinion, Personally, From my perspective…)

Cách viết mở bài

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These days, many people spend an increasing amount of time commuting to the workplace or academic institutions. Although certain merits can be pointed out, I believe that it is overall a negative development.

Cách viết thân bài

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On the one hand, some people may consider longer trips to and from work or school as an opportunity to enjoy themselves. First, some people can take advantage of those longer rides to pursue their interest in reading or movie watching. Besides, while sitting on a train or a bus, the bliss of solitude can give passengers moments of freedom to contemplate their own matters. Additionally, some people can use these longer rides to have a quick nap to recharge their energies. For example, it is easy to catch sight of office workers taking a nap on the subway in Japan, a country where people have the culture of long working hours.

Nevertheless, longer travelling time to work and school negatively affects people’s lives. First, long hours driving drains people’s health both physically and mentally. Since driving requires a level of alertness and concentration, any sign of sleepiness, fatigue or careless behavior can lead to tragic accidents. Additionally, spending more and more time travelling leaves less time for other more productive activities such as spending time with beloved families or chasing one’s pursuits. As a result, those people easily suffer from stress. Finally, longer driving time on a daily basis increases transportation costs including fuel and car maintenance

Cách viết kết bài

Tóm tắt các ý chính của 2 bodies và trình bày ý kiến cá nhân

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In conclusion, despite certain advantages, the phenomenon of spending an increasing amount of time travelling has adverse implications on people’s quality of life. 

Bài mẫu hoàn chỉnh

These days, many people spend an increasing amount of time commuting to the workplace or academic institutions. Although certain merits can be pointed out, I believe that it is overall a negative development.

On the one hand, some people may consider longer trips to and from work or school as an opportunity to enjoy themselves. First, some people can take advantage of those longer rides to pursue their interest in reading or movie watching. Besides, while sitting on a train or a bus, the bliss of solitude can give passengers moments of freedom to contemplate their own matters. Additionally, some people can use these longer rides to have a quick nap to recharge their energies. For example, it is easy to catch sight of office workers taking a nap on the subway in Japan, a country where people have the culture of long working hours.

Nevertheless, longer travelling time to work and school negatively affects people’s lives. First, long hours driving drains people’s health both physically and mentally. Since driving requires a level of alertness and concentration, any sign of sleepiness, fatigue or careless behavior can lead to tragic accidents. Additionally, spending more and more time travelling leaves less time for other more productive activities such as spending time with beloved families or chasing one’s pursuits. As a result, those people easily suffer from stress. Finally, longer driving time on a daily basis increases transportation costs including fuel and car maintenance

In conclusion, despite certain advantages, the phenomenon of spending an increasing amount of time travelling has adverse implications on people’s quality of life. 

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(Written by Ms. Nguyen Thi Thu Huong, IELTS 8.0)

Paraphrase keywords trong đề bài

  • more and more time = an increasing amount of time = longer trips = those longer rides = longer travelling time = long hours driving = longer driving time
  • travelling = commuting
  • to work or school = to the workplace or academic institutions
  • has negative development = negatively affects people’s lives = has adverse implications on
  • benefits = merits = advantages

Các từ vựng hay trong bài

  • an opportunity to: một cơ hội để
  • to drain sb’s health: làm kiệt sức của ai
  • physically and mentally: về mặt thể chất và tinh thần
  • alertness: sự tỉnh táo
  • to take advantage of: tận dụng
  • to pursue sb’s interest in: theo đuổi sở thích
  • the bliss of solitude: sự hạnh phúc của đơn độc
  • passengers: hành khách
  • to contemplate sb’s matters: suy ngẫm về vấn đề của ai đó
  • to have a quick nap: chợp mắt
  • to recharge sb’s energies: nạp năng lượng
  • to catch sight of sth: bắt gặp
  • fatigue: mệt mỏi, uể oải
  • tragic accidents: tai nạn thảm khốc
  • productive activities: hoạt động có chất lượng
  • beloved families: gia đình thân yêu
  • to chase one’s pursuits: theo đuổi sở thích của ai đó
  • to suffer from: chịu đựng
  • on a daily basis: hằng ngày
  • car maintenance: bảo dưỡng xe ô tô

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Ms. Nguyen Thi Thu Huong, IELTS 8.0.

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