Bài Mẫu Writing Task 2 Ngày 8/2/2020 – Social Media

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Đề thi IELTS Writing ngày 8/2/2020

The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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Phân tích đề Social Media

Topic: Social media

Keywords: Social media, is replacing, face-to-face interaction.

Dạng bài: Advantages or Disadvantages – Xu hướng này là có lợi hay bất lợi 

Cách viết mở bài

Social Media

These days, social networking sites have gained in popularity as a substitute to face-to-face communication. In my opinion, despite some undeniable benefits, the growing prevalence of online media brings about more drawbacks.

Các viết thân bài

Social Media

On the one hand, perhaps the most noticeable advantage of online platforms is that people can keep in touch with their beloved ones, regardless of geography locations. For example, members of families who are apart because of working or studying can easily use virtual conversational exchanges such as video calls or texts to keep their families updated with the latest news in their lives. Second, social networks connect people sharing the same interests no matter where they are. For example, Facebook offers its 2.4 billion users the freedom to join a myriad of groups and events which match their interests. 

On the other hand, the setbacks of social media are more concerning. First, powerful social technologies downplay the importance of direct contact. Many people prefer to interact online on their electronic devices rather than physical interaction, preventing them from engaging in real-life relationships. In this sense, social media will impede real-life communication skills such as body language or eye contact which are actually of great significance in their lives. Second, the excessive reliance on social media to exchange socially also adversely affects the way users communicate. They get into the habit of using abbreviations, slang, and emotion icons to express their thoughts and feelings, widening the gap between them and people of other generations, even creating some sorts of misunderstanding and discomfort informal situations.

Cách viết kết bài

Social Media

In conclusion, for the aforementioned reasons, in spite of unprecedented conveniences and comfort of online communication, I am of the opinion that the disadvantages that they have brought to our lives are more significant.

Bài mẫu hoàn chỉnh

These days, social networking sites have gained in popularity as a substitute to face-to-face communication. In my opinion, despite some undeniable benefits, the growing prevalence of online media brings about more drawbacks.

On the one hand, perhaps the most noticeable advantage of online platforms is that people can keep in touch with their beloved ones, regardless of geography locations. For example, members of families who are apart because of working or studying can easily use virtual conversational exchanges such as video calls or texts to keep their families updated with the latest news in their lives. Second, social networks connect people sharing the same interests no matter where they are. For example, Facebook offers its 2.4 billion users the freedom to join a myriad of groups and events which match their interests. 

On the other hand, the setbacks of social media are more concerning. First, powerful social technologies downplay the importance of direct contact. Many people prefer to interact online on their electronic devices rather than physical interaction, preventing them from engaging in real-life relationships. In this sense, social media will impede real-life communication skills such as body language or eye contact which are actually of great significance in their lives. Second, the excessive reliance on social media to exchange socially also adversely affects the way users communicate. They get into the habit of using abbreviations, slang, and emotion icons to express their thoughts and feelings, widening the gap between them and people of other generations, even creating some sorts of misunderstanding and discomfort informal situations.

In conclusion, for the aforementioned reasons, in spite of unprecedented conveniences and comfort of online communication, I am of the opinion that the disadvantages that they have brought to our lives are more significant.

(292 words)

Written by Ms. Thu Huong Nguyen – IELTS 8.0

Paraphrase keywords

  • social media = social networking sites = online media = online platforms = social networks = social technologies 
  • virtual conversational exchanges = online communication = interact online
  • advantages = benefits
  • disadvantages = drawbacks = setbacks
  • is replacing = a substitute 
  • interaction = communication

Các từ vựng hay trong bài

  • prevalence: sự phổ biến
  • to keep in touch: giữ liên lạc
  • beloved ones: những người thân yêu
  • regardless of: bất chấp, bất kể
  • to keep sb updated with: cập nhật tình hình
  • a myriad of sth: vô số
  • to downplay: hạ xuống, hạ bệ
  • to prevent sb from sth: ngăn ai khỏi làm gì
  • be of great significance: có ý nghĩa lớn, rất quan trọng
  • to impede cản trở
  • reliance on sth: sự dựa dẫm vào
  • to get into the habit of sth: có thói quen
  • abbreviation: viết tắt
  • slang: tiếng lóng
  • to adversely affect: ảnh hưởng xấu
  • unprecedented convenience : sự tiện lợi chưa từng thấy

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