Bài mẫu Speaking band 8.0 – Describe an old person who has influenced you

Describe an old person

Describe an old person who has influenced you

Một người già (an old person) có ảnh hưởng lớn đến bạn (who has influenced you) là một đề thuộc chủ đề cốt lõi DESCRIBE A PERSON. Hãy cùng nghiên cứu cấu trúc triển khai mô tả một người trong bài post này nhé.

Dưới đây là bài mẫu Speaking Part 2 do cô Trương Thu Hương – Academic Manager của Anh ngữ SYM làm. Từ vựng mang tính thực hành cao, chú trọng vào cấu trúc bài nói để ăn điểm rõ ràng, và quan trọng nhất là phát âm chuẩn. Hãy cùng xem bài các em nhé

Tham khảo:

Describe a child you know

Describe a person who is good at his/ her job

Describe a person who often travels by plane

Describe a person who tries to protect the environment

Describe an old person you admire.

Describe someone who has had an important influence on your life

Describe someone you are close to or know a lot about

Describe an old person who has influenced you

You should say:

  • Who this person is
  • How long you have known him/ her/ How often you see him/ her
  • What qualities he/she has

And explain why you admire him/ her so much.

Phân tích cách triển khai bài mẫu 

Step 1

 

Today I’d like to tell you about my grandmother who has a big influence on me.
Step 2

What she looks like

 

 

How often you see her

 

 

 

 

What qualities she has

 

 

 

My grandmother is in mid-60s. She’s pretty beautiful with a round face, full lips and fair complexion although she has some wrinkles.

 

I used to see her very regularly, say twice or three times a week. I haven’t visited her for weeks as I’ve got too much work. I will spend more time with her when my schedule gets less tight.

 

She is known for her punctuality. She’s on time without fail. She often tells me that punctuality is very important as it shows respect for those waiting for us, especially business partners.

She is also caring. She always cooks her grandchildren good dishes and gives them money to buy their favorite items.

Step 3

Explain why you admire her so much.

 

 

There are two main reasons why I really respect her.

Unlike her peers in mid-60s who choose to enjoy the convenience of modern life, she chooses to devote herself to being a volunteer calling for helping disabled children. Her love for volunteering work has inspired me a lot, and I’ve become interested in this type of meaningful work to help less fortunate people around me.

Secondly, she always looks on the bright side and tries to live her life to the fullest. In times of hardships, she stays calm and tries her best to figure out solutions. You know, I can learn a lot from these positives. I used to be a pessimistic person who tended to blame fate for bringing me troubles, but now I’ve become more responsible, and calmer under pressure.

Lastly, she welcomes novel ideas and rarely makes any judgments on others’ thoughts or decisions. She’s taught me to stop being a judgmental person and start being a good listener.

Step 4 That’s all I want to say.

SAMPLE ANSWER (band 8.0)

Today I’d like to tell you about my grandmother who has a big influence on me.

My grandmother is in mid-60s. She’s pretty beautiful with a round face, full lips and fair complexion although she has some wrinkles.

I used to see her very regularly, say twice or three times a week. I haven’t visited her for weeks as I’ve got too much work. I will spend more time with her when my schedule gets less tight.

She is known for her punctuality. She’s on time without fail. She often tells me that punctuality is very important as it shows respect for those waiting for us, especially business partners.

She is also caring. She always cooks her grandchildren good dishes and gives them money to buy their favorite items.

There are two main reasons why I really respect her.

Unlike her peers in mid-60s who choose to enjoy the convenience of modern life, she chooses to devote herself to being a volunteer calling for helping disabled children. Her love for volunteering work has inspired me a lot, and I’ve become interested in this type of meaningful work to help less fortunate people around me.

Secondly, she always looks on the bright side and tries to live her life to the fullest. In times of hardship, she stays calm and tries her best to figure out solutions. You know, I can learn a lot from these positives. I used to be a pessimistic person who tended to blame fate for bringing me troubles, but now I’ve become more responsible, and calmer under pressure.

Lastly, she welcomes novel ideas and rarely makes any judgments on others’ thoughts or decisions. She’s taught me to stop being a judgmental person and start being a good listener.

That’s all I want to say.

Từ vựng hay trong bài

  • Fair complexion: nước da trắng
  • Wrinkles: nếp nhăn
  • Punctuality: sự đúng giờ
  • With fail: đều đặn
  • Business partners: đối tác kinh doanh
  • Be caring: yêu thương, quan tâm mọi người
  • To devote time/ efforts to sth: dành thời gian/ công sức cho việc gì
  • Be disabled: tàn tật
  • To look on the bright side: lạc quan
  • Live life to the fullest: sống trọn vẹn nhất có thể
  • To stay calm: giữ bình tĩnh

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